Haiku 2

Grey forlorn Mountain Wind howls in defiant rage Crowned with bitter ice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Mountains do seem to contain such power. I enjoyed the personalization in your haiku Shane. ; )
Mac Donald Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 2:30 PM
An impressive write, Shane! Fantastic imagery, I can feel the icy wind while looking at that jagged "forlorn Mountain". Not at all a tea party place, Alice wearing a parka? Love this write. Hugs to you, Mikki
Nance Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Oh I like that description-"crowned with bitter ice"
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 7:32 AM
stunning imagery and image Shane:-) hugs Jan xx
Gazbowski Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:45 PM
strong imagery.
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