Haiku 2

Grey forlorn Mountain Wind howls in defiant rage Crowned with bitter ice

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2016 4:30:00 AM

Mountains do seem to contain such power. I enjoyed the personalization in your haiku Shane. ; )

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/2/2016 2:30:00 PM

An impressive write, Shane! Fantastic imagery, I can feel the icy wind while looking at that jagged "forlorn Mountain". Not at all a tea party place, Alice wearing a parka? Love this write. Hugs to you, Mikki

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/1/2016 2:46:00 PM

Oh I like that description-"crowned with bitter ice"

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 7:32:00 AM

stunning imagery and image Shane:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/27/2016 8:45:00 PM

strong imagery.