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Daver Austin

January 7, 2014 at 4:27 PM

This could go all sorts of ways and that is what a Haiku should do. Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A

January 6, 2014 at 12:30 AM

Timothy ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Donna Jones

May 20, 2013 at 8:46 PM

Wow Timothy...every time I read this I find a different meaning I could imagine! Sorry about the delayed congrats...its been a very stormy tornatic day in my neck of the world for two days

Timothy Hicks

May 20, 2013 at 9:41 PM

Sorry to hear that, Donna! There has been quite a bit of drama for me as well... trying to make time for the Soup, but it's not always easy!

Timothy Hicks

May 20, 2013 at 5:14 PM

Thank you all for the congratulations below me (and any that might appear above this comment). This is one of my faves and I'm happy it did well in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2013 at 2:40 PM

passion splash!!! Congrats on the HM. I sure like this one.

Richard Lamoureux

May 20, 2013 at 11:52 AM

Well done Tim

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 20, 2013 at 11:12 AM

Congrats on your fine win in the contest. Well done. AO

Therese Bacha

May 20, 2013 at 9:04 AM

Congratulations Tim., very nice. Love T.

Dinda Minardi

March 11, 2013 at 2:23 AM

Awww, very sweet!

Timothy Hicks

March 11, 2013 at 9:11 AM

Thanks again Dindy! YOU are very sweet, methinks :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 9, 2013 at 8:00 PM

Timothy, nice. Always,~ LINDA

Timothy Hicks

March 10, 2013 at 3:41 AM

I appreciate your input. Your images with the mother blowing bubbles wasn't what I imagined, but I think it's great to see different angles of the same piece.

Debbie Guzzi

March 9, 2013 at 6:13 PM

You arre very intuitive! I always wanted to be an elementary school teacher, at one time I did have a pre-school BUT the Flower Children poem was for a contest by a friend with a 4 year old girl learning the alphabet, so I did ok? YOU are correct in not naming your haiku, numbering them is best [though you can put the first line in the title space & that's Ok too!] now ..remember do not capitalize & that's a very nice haiku! Light & Love

Timothy Hicks

March 9, 2013 at 6:51 PM

Aha I guess halfway right!... lol. I find titles for haiku somewhat distracting. They are so short that I feel the poem should speak for itself. Capitalizing haiku isn't "technically" correct, but I'm sort of OCD about capitalization... haha, maybe soon I can change my ways!

Yanny Widjanarko

March 9, 2013 at 6:10 PM

Really great imaginary that you shared, thank you for your kindly visit before to my page :) and welcome to Poetry Soup, enjoyed my reading this morning :)

Timothy Hicks

March 9, 2013 at 6:49 PM

'Twas a pleasure and how kind of you to also reply to one of mine! I haven't met one unkind person yet on this site!

Russell Sivey

March 9, 2013 at 5:35 PM

It's nice to see new faces here on the Soup Timothy, especially when they are as kind as you! Your Haiku is exquisite, so very nicely done! I really enjoyed reading it tonight, Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks

March 9, 2013 at 5:53 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome! Haiku is one of my favorite forms to write in...