Haiku #2

Hummingbirds beating
Ruby flecks of speed
Opening green wombs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 26, 2009 at 12:56 AM
Very good imagery Gerard.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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June 17, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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March 4, 2009 at 2:54 PM
How incredibly insightful and descriptive! I never thought about hummingbirds as ruby flecks of speed. Well done Gerard! -Always Alexandra
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