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Haiku #2

Hummingbirds beating Ruby flecks of speed Opening green wombs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 12:56:00 AM
Very good imagery Gerard.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/17/2009 3:41:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/4/2009 2:54:00 PM
How incredibly insightful and descriptive! I never thought about hummingbirds as ruby flecks of speed. Well done Gerard! -Always Alexandra
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