Haiku 29

hands of time
grains of sand shifting
through the hour-glass

6/21/13
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July 9, 2013 at 3:59 PM
love this clever haiku, Phyl. Hope you're having a great week x
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July 6, 2013 at 11:12 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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June 28, 2013 at 10:25 PM
a wonderful haiku, on the imagery of shift changing.. I am hoping the hourglass on my side, will flip before the grains sit on the bottom... SKAT
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