Haiku 29

curious baby
licks his fingers -
vacant outlet

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 9:33 PM

Cool. !

Manel Gunatillake

May 17, 2013 at 10:16 PM

This is very common when you carry the baby in a pram. But Asians like us always carry them in the arms sometimes with over weighed goods and parcels in both hands. Tiring job but the baby is safe. Well written. An eye operner Thank you manel

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 11:35 PM

As long as the baby is safe it should be plenty worth it. Thank you for stopping by... appreciate the visit :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 17, 2013 at 11:57 AM

Smashing pen! Good luck. AO

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 2:54 PM

Thank you Abdul. This is not for a contest if that's what you were thinking... but good luck is good luck... so thanks :)

Caleah Buil

May 17, 2013 at 9:22 AM

Ohhhh noooo... That doesn't bode very well for that poor baby!

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 2:53 PM

Nope... I hope this is a warning for parents to keep an eye on their baby!

Richard Lamoureux

May 17, 2013 at 8:19 AM

Ouch!

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 2:53 PM

I'd have no idea just how painful that would be...

Poet Tacito

May 17, 2013 at 7:35 AM

Oh dear! Setting the stage here, eh? :) Nice!

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 2:52 PM

Perhaaaaaps... ha ha.

Russell Sivey

May 17, 2013 at 5:49 AM

I foresee trouble within this write, that baby is asking for it! What great insight for this amazing poem my friend! I enjoyed reading it this morning! Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks

May 17, 2013 at 2:52 PM

Trouble indeed! That poor, poor baby... thanks for reading!