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Haiku 29

curious baby licks his fingers - vacant outlet

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/15/2020 9:33:00 PM

Cool. !

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/17/2013 10:16:00 PM

This is very common when you carry the baby in a pram. But Asians like us always carry them in the arms sometimes with over weighed goods and parcels in both hands. Tiring job but the baby is safe. Well written. An eye operner Thank you manel

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 11:35:00 PM

As long as the baby is safe it should be plenty worth it. Thank you for stopping by... appreciate the visit :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/17/2013 11:57:00 AM

Smashing pen! Good luck. AO

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Abdul. This is not for a contest if that's what you were thinking... but good luck is good luck... so thanks :)

Caleah Buil

Date: 5/17/2013 9:22:00 AM

Ohhhh noooo... That doesn't bode very well for that poor baby!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:53:00 PM

Nope... I hope this is a warning for parents to keep an eye on their baby!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2013 8:19:00 AM

Ouch!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:53:00 PM

I'd have no idea just how painful that would be...

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/17/2013 7:35:00 AM

Oh dear! Setting the stage here, eh? :) Nice!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:52:00 PM

Perhaaaaaps... ha ha.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/17/2013 5:49:00 AM

I foresee trouble within this write, that baby is asking for it! What great insight for this amazing poem my friend! I enjoyed reading it this morning! Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:52:00 PM

Trouble indeed! That poor, poor baby... thanks for reading!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2013 12:29:00 AM

oooh, danger coming.... ME LIKES this.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/17/2013 2:51:00 PM

Not something to be taken lightly... this might be scary for parents to read (lol)...