Haiku 29

Butterflies and her lips
	unfasten rare harmonies.
	Joy in the music.







	




        © Jack Jordan 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2013 at 11:32 PM

this is really pretty!

Jack Jordan

March 29, 2013 at 7:37 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Donna Jones

March 28, 2013 at 9:03 PM

Lovely Jack...I'm going to get brave enough to try one of these some day...Donna

Jack Jordan

March 28, 2013 at 9:34 PM

Thanks, Donna. As I replied to David, the rules are changing, almost to the point where there are no rules. You should give it a try. I can soupmail a few references to you if you are interested. Jack

David Fisher

March 28, 2013 at 6:54 PM

I enjoyed this Haiku...each line has meaning and certainly contributes to the whole.

Jack Jordan

March 28, 2013 at 8:25 PM

Thank you, David. Haiku is an experiment for me. I've found I enjoy working with the form, and have discovered that contemporary English-language haiku do not necessarily follow the traditional 5-7-5 scheme. This one is almost that, but not quite. Jack