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Haiku

a cricket in the eaves
harmonizes with
night rain
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old river benue
a fisherman's canoe
ladened for market
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graveyard's windy dust
sending papers and leaves high
every ones underground

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Poet Destroyer A

November 21, 2012 at 8:30 PM

Charles,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Phyllis Babcock

June 14, 2011 at 11:15 AM

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Phyllis Babcock

May 6, 2011 at 7:26 AM

Nice to see this series of Haiku Charles. You have become very good with this form. I am stuck on the old form and this one does not seem to work that well for me. It is like stating a fact from your perspective. Good for you on this. love mom