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Haiku

a cricket in the eaves
harmonizes with
night rain
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old river benue
a fisherman's canoe
ladened for market
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graveyard's windy dust
sending papers and leaves high
every ones underground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/21/2012 8:30:00 PM
Charles,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:15:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:26:00 AM
Nice to see this series of Haiku Charles. You have become very good with this form. I am stuck on the old form and this one does not seem to work that well for me. It is like stating a fact from your perspective. Good for you on this. love mom
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Date: 4/30/2011 11:16:00 PM
Charles, deep and awesome... how you doing? ..p.d.
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:11:00 PM
Charles, these are unbelievably good haiku!!
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:18:00 AM
THANKS DEAR, I APPRECIATE. I AM POSTING A POEM TODAY THAT HAS YOU IN IT. PLS READ AND COMMENT. SEE U.
Date: 4/19/2011 1:01:00 PM
Nice haiku with great images
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:25:00 AM
thanks dear Ram.