Haiku 28

Such dream-like silence;
	chemistry, density, air.
	Ghost of a poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:59 AM
The haiku I wrote was more so comical than anything (I haven't posted yet, but I will tomorrow and then I'll message you)... :)
Jordan Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 10:58 AM
I'll look forward to it.
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Great imagery, Jack. I enjoyed seeing this one.
Jordan Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Perhaps, as Timothy says, it was to abstract... J
Hicks Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 10:08 AM
I wrote a haiku around these same lines awhile back (though it wasn't as poetic). What is silence but potential writing space? Very abstract haiku...
Jordan Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Or painting space, or drawing space or... surely here are others. What is the name of your haiku? I would like to read it. J
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