Haiku 28

Such dream-like silence; chemistry, density, air. Ghost of a poem.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/23/2013 9:59:00 AM

The haiku I wrote was more so comical than anything (I haven't posted yet, but I will tomorrow and then I'll message you)... :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/23/2013 10:58:00 AM

I'll look forward to it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 12:11:00 AM

Great imagery, Jack. I enjoyed seeing this one.

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/23/2013 7:16:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Perhaps, as Timothy says, it was to abstract... J

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2013 10:08:00 AM

I wrote a haiku around these same lines awhile back (though it wasn't as poetic). What is silence but potential writing space? Very abstract haiku...

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/22/2013 11:46:00 AM

Or painting space, or drawing space or... surely here are others. What is the name of your haiku? I would like to read it. J