David Meade Poet Haiku

Haiku 27 Life Friend

mornings she greets me

                               love lines wrinkle her long face

                                    tall, proud, my oak tree


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David Meade
11/12/2014
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Maurice Yvonne November 20, 2014 at 9:18 PM one hundred pages of words could of said less. i love how your poetry leads me through a forest full of images and every image engraved with the word love. i need to fav this also go back and fav a few more, then read more and fav some of those too. thank you David. David Meade November 21, 2014 at 8:13 PM Most kind -- but it is your imagination that transforms the words into the forest of images . . . and it is your ability to love and be loved that brings life the words. a partnership of good friends.

Trinity Biles November 13, 2014 at 1:08 PM very sweet <3 -TJ David Meade November 15, 2014 at 8:09 PM Just like you!! Thank-you for your visit.

Bl Devnath November 13, 2014 at 12:34 PM Beautiful poem worded with natural rhythm. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl David Meade November 21, 2014 at 8:14 PM Thank-you BL for your visit and kind words -- nature is beautiful.

Liam Mcdaid November 13, 2014 at 6:39 AM beautifully painted picture david

John Beam November 13, 2014 at 6:07 AM enjoyed haiku david very nice twist. David Meade November 21, 2014 at 8:16 PM Thank-you John! I do love trees and appreciate your visit.

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2014 at 3:57 PM wow: her long face. So you have the tree trunk as her whole face. very unique poem!

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2014 at 3:56 PM first of all, love what you said about kimchi. So you must have had it. UGGGG, I cannot believe people actually put that disgusting stuff down their throats!!

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2014 at 3:41 PM You must have seen The Crack Of Dawn..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..I think it was Black Angus that was out just after the crack of dawn in a heavy fog grazing..Sara David Meade November 12, 2014 at 4:22 PM Yes, the Black Angus love the fog almost as much as I loved your poem. Your the best --

Paul Callus November 12, 2014 at 2:25 PM A captivating picture you give us here, David. Well done! a 7 rating. // paul David Meade November 12, 2014 at 4:27 PM Thanks Paul -- I hope you can find a good tree-friend like Treebeard, they make all the difference! All the very best my friend.

Eve Roper November 12, 2014 at 12:58 PM David, love the Haiku, good painting of the oak tree :) eve David Meade November 12, 2014 at 4:28 PM How did you know I liked painting trees -- big trunks and canopies!! All the best.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 12, 2014 at 12:41 PM Great Haiku David. I love that last line. The second one scared me lol. David Meade November 12, 2014 at 4:29 PM My wife had the same thought!! I do like strong hard women -- like oak trees!! How about you?

Jan Allison November 12, 2014 at 9:34 AM beautifully penned David:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison November 12, 2014 at 12:08 PM I have written another one this afternoon David - so few words yet they paint a brilliant picture:-) hugs Jan xx David Meade November 12, 2014 at 12:04 PM Thanks Jan, I read your lovely haiku today -- it my favorite of all of your creative work so far . . . be strong and courageous you have miles to go . . . love and prayers my friend.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 12, 2014 at 8:51 AM O yes, a great haiku writer. "tall, proud, my oak tree" - life friend , indeed. Great haiku: love ....RAJAT David Meade November 12, 2014 at 12:05 PM Thank-you for your visit . . . you are the master haiku by friend. All the very best to you.