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Haiku 27 Life Friend

mornings she greets me love lines wrinkle her long face tall, proud, my oak tree -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- David Meade 11/12/2014 Live Generously

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/20/2014 9:18:00 PM

one hundred pages of words could of said less. i love how your poetry leads me through a forest full of images and every image engraved with the word love. i need to fav this also go back and fav a few more, then read more and fav some of those too. thank you David.

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:13:00 PM

Most kind -- but it is your imagination that transforms the words into the forest of images . . . and it is your ability to love and be loved that brings life the words. a partnership of good friends.

Trinity Biles

Date: 11/13/2014 1:08:00 PM

very sweet <3 -TJ

David Meade
Date: 11/15/2014 8:09:00 PM

Just like you!! Thank-you for your visit.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/13/2014 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful poem worded with natural rhythm. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thank-you BL for your visit and kind words -- nature is beautiful.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/13/2014 6:39:00 AM

beautifully painted picture david

John Beam

Date: 11/13/2014 6:07:00 AM

enjoyed haiku david very nice twist.

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:16:00 PM

Thank-you John! I do love trees and appreciate your visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2014 3:57:00 PM

wow: her long face. So you have the tree trunk as her whole face. very unique poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2014 3:56:00 PM

first of all, love what you said about kimchi. So you must have had it. UGGGG, I cannot believe people actually put that disgusting stuff down their throats!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2014 3:41:00 PM

You must have seen The Crack Of Dawn..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..I think it was Black Angus that was out just after the crack of dawn in a heavy fog grazing..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:22:00 PM

Yes, the Black Angus love the fog almost as much as I loved your poem. Your the best --

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2014 2:25:00 PM

A captivating picture you give us here, David. Well done! a 7 rating. // paul

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:27:00 PM

Thanks Paul -- I hope you can find a good tree-friend like Treebeard, they make all the difference! All the very best my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2014 12:58:00 PM

David, love the Haiku, good painting of the oak tree :) eve

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:28:00 PM

How did you know I liked painting trees -- big trunks and canopies!! All the best.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/12/2014 12:41:00 PM

Great Haiku David. I love that last line. The second one scared me lol.

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:29:00 PM

My wife had the same thought!! I do like strong hard women -- like oak trees!! How about you?

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2014 9:34:00 AM

beautifully penned David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2014 12:08:00 PM

I have written another one this afternoon David - so few words yet they paint a brilliant picture:-) hugs Jan xx

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 12:04:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I read your lovely haiku today -- it my favorite of all of your creative work so far . . . be strong and courageous you have miles to go . . . love and prayers my friend.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

O yes, a great haiku writer. "tall, proud, my oak tree" - life friend , indeed. Great haiku: love ....RAJAT

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 12:05:00 PM

Thank-you for your visit . . . you are the master haiku by friend. All the very best to you.