Haiku 27

waking
your scent lingers...
I smile
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Horne Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 12:29 AM
love this romantic haiku, Phyl. yes, I'm doing good, thanks for asking. Hope you're having a great week and enjoying getting that sun tan x
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June 28, 2013 at 10:29 PM
awe! now that is a smile, and loving way to haiku you loved ones scent......... a huge smile........ SKAT
Anish Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:35 PM
It is a charming poem. Maybe it is really a senryu - it is not really about nature. In any event - keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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June 16, 2013 at 9:54 AM
I smile with this so sweet and awesome haiku of yours my dear friend, Phyllis. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope you're doing well now. Have a blessed weekend! God bless you and your love ones! love lots & big big hugs, Leonora
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 11:11 AM
love this beauty, Phyll. Sorry to hear the flu is still affecting you - hope you feel much better soon x
Comporozos Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:31 AM
A true haiku in meaning and shortness of expression
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:43 AM
- Just beautiful, Phyllis !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 14, 2013 at 12:07 AM
ohhh yes, this is GOOD. (get WELL for once and for all, Phyllis!!)
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