Haiku 27

Sea and sigh whispers.
	As water rolls, the waves fall
	dark and velvety.

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Timothy Hicks

March 22, 2013 at 10:04 AM

... dark and velvety... adored that last line! Makes me think of fresh coffee in the morning (wonder what that's like to swim in?)

Jack Jordan

March 22, 2013 at 11:43 AM

Especially with cream. J

Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2013 at 5:50 PM

always writing beautiful haiku , are you!!

Jack Jordan

March 21, 2013 at 10:00 PM

Thanks, but not always beautiful. I've got one coming up that is far from it. I've become fascinated by the form, and just checked eight books on haiku out of the university library. The possible variations are amazing, including Jack Kerouac's and William S. Burroughs'.