Haiku 26

Nowhere, some-
	where, middlewhere
	Oklahoma, where.








        Thanks, Charlotte Puddifoot, for the inspiration.

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Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2013 at 5:52 PM

haha, where?? where IS it?? That' s the pan handle state, right?

Jack Jordan

March 21, 2013 at 9:53 PM

That's the one, and I live exactly in the middle of it. Texas has a panhandle too, but Oklahoma's looks more like a handle since the state as a whole looks like a frying pan.

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 20, 2013 at 6:04 AM

well, I'm honoured that I inspired you! an intriguing little piece, I often feel like that - in the middle of no man's land! lol I will stop by to read more when I can, so pressed for time these days that I'm not here as often as I would like...

Jack Jordan

March 20, 2013 at 8:28 AM

As I replied to PD, your comments about correctness were indeed an inspiration. Thanks for being willing to write it. Jack

Sara Kendrick

March 19, 2013 at 4:26 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed ..Got a chuckle..Sara

Jack Jordan

March 19, 2013 at 4:37 PM

Thanks, Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

March 19, 2013 at 4:02 PM

he he Jack, love the way she inspired your haiku... Charlotte's an awesome poet... hope the journey goes well.... always~ LINDA

Jack Jordan

March 19, 2013 at 4:36 PM

I just couldn't not do it after reading her piece on "haiku rules," especially since I've encountered that myself recently. I've been trying to use this little piece somewhere, and she sort of gave me permission.