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Haiku

Moments passing by The frog’s throat inflates like gum The universe bursts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/1/2010 9:52:00 PM
A great analogy haiku here. It can be taken a few different ways! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2010 7:03:00 PM
Quite an image, David. We can see it so clearly through your words. Excellent haiku with a powerful ending. Best wishes to you for a wonderful holiday season. Love, Carolyn
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