Haiku

Moments passing by
The frog’s throat inflates like gum
The universe bursts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:52 PM
A great analogy haiku here. It can be taken a few different ways! Luv, Andrea
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November 20, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Quite an image, David. We can see it so clearly through your words. Excellent haiku with a powerful ending. Best wishes to you for a wonderful holiday season. Love, Carolyn
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