Haiku 25

waves crash ashore
seaweed floats to and fro...
salt filled air
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Duncan Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:48 PM
love the haiku and the ocean ;}
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I believe that you are back..This winter was mild here but lots of cloudy days which can be dreary..Thanks for stopping by to comment..My husband is facing spinal surgery again..He has found out he is diabetic and has pernicious anemia..I am about the same..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 1:18 AM
thanks for all your comments and I sure wish you had some new poems up for me to see, dearie. It's after 1 a.m here and I need to get to bed soon, but still have more comments to make. I sure hope you are having a better week than that one time you were so busy . Luv, Andrea
Phillips Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Simple words but nice imagery
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:54 PM
I like the assonance of the O sounds in lines one and two of this haiku, Phyllis. Nice to see you posting up a new poem!
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 9:20 AM
yes ..... it smells like ocean ..... lovely Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ryerson Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Perfect picture painted of my favorite place to be, Phyllis - Tim
Horne Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 4:11 PM
just love this one, Phyl
Wilson Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 9:43 PM
this is so picturesque...love the ocean! luv,Deb
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