David Meade Poet Haiku

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The energetic sunspot known to solar astronomers as AR 12192, is nearly 20 times the surface area of Earth . . . Its largest flares produced as much energy as a billion thermonuclear weapons.  WSJ   10/30/2014

Haiku 24 Sun Life

mighty in power

                                          
                                      u   n
                                   a         c
      bright sun flares   l                 h    into space


                      your love-kiss consumes me






David Meade
Live Generously
11.10.2014

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Victoria Anderson-Throop November 29, 2014 at 4:33 PM terrific use of space! Very creative!

Pandita Sietesantos November 14, 2014 at 3:07 PM David, you are haiku royalty! What an exquisite piece! Love it! Pandita David Meade November 14, 2014 at 8:56 PM There is great power in the love-kiss -- handle with care! Your the best . . .

Trinity Biles November 12, 2014 at 11:58 AM Aw. I love this, so sweet and creative. -TJ David Meade November 14, 2014 at 8:56 PM You are the sweetest . . . hugs and Love-Kisses!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 12, 2014 at 9:12 AM A great haiku. This "launch " is splendid!...LOVE xxxx rajat

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2014 at 3:43 PM this one is very good. I love everything about it.

Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 5:30 PM excellent piece my friend David Meade November 11, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thank-you for stopping by -- from someone who knows that flares and loves need to be handled carefully -- they can burn deeply!

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2014 at 3:50 PM Unique and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara David Meade November 11, 2014 at 7:55 AM You are very kind Ms. Sara -- may your day be filled with light and love.

M. L. Kiser November 10, 2014 at 2:18 PM Dynamic haiku. David Meade November 11, 2014 at 7:56 AM Dynamic is a great description for the power of flares and love-kisses . . . be careful, they are explosive!

Brenda Meier-Hans November 10, 2014 at 1:04 PM Looks and reads beautifully. Great Greg. 7's your lucky number today because I also love what you did here. David Meade November 11, 2014 at 8:04 AM thank-you again for your email and feedback . . . much appreciated . . . all the very best my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 10, 2014 at 12:43 PM Very unique and creative haiku in shape and topic, David! A 7 from me my dear friend :) love and light! xxxx D. David Meade November 11, 2014 at 7:59 AM Thank-you Ms. Potter -- since the English language is not as descriptive and symbolic as the Japanese Language, I tried to use the placement of the sentences and letters to help create a deeper meaning. Thank-you for referencing the shape -- your faithful reading of the haiku is much appreciated. . . light and love.

Jan Allison November 10, 2014 at 12:16 PM WOW you launched yourself to a 7 from me with this stunning haiku! Hugs jan x David Meade November 11, 2014 at 8:02 AM The launching of flares and love-kisses are powerful events . . . as you well know . . . may your afternoon be filled with much love and tenderness, my sweet friend.