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Haiku 24 Sun Life

mighty in power

                                          
                                      u   n
                                   a         c
      bright sun flares   l                 h    into space


                      your love-kiss consumes me






David Meade
Live Generously
11.10.2014

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Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 11/29/2014 4:33:00 PM terrific use of space! Very creative! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/14/2014 3:07:00 PM David, you are haiku royalty! What an exquisite piece! Love it! Pandita Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/14/2014 8:56:00 PM There is great power in the love-kiss -- handle with care! Your the best . . .

Trinity Biles Date: 11/12/2014 11:58:00 AM Aw. I love this, so sweet and creative. -TJ Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/14/2014 8:56:00 PM You are the sweetest . . . hugs and Love-Kisses!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 9:12:00 AM A great haiku. This "launch " is splendid!...LOVE xxxx rajat Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/11/2014 3:43:00 PM this one is very good. I love everything about it. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 11/10/2014 5:30:00 PM excellent piece my friend Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 7:54:00 AM Thank-you for stopping by -- from someone who knows that flares and loves need to be handled carefully -- they can burn deeply!

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/10/2014 3:50:00 PM Unique and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 7:55:00 AM You are very kind Ms. Sara -- may your day be filled with light and love.

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/10/2014 2:18:00 PM Dynamic haiku. Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 7:56:00 AM Dynamic is a great description for the power of flares and love-kisses . . . be careful, they are explosive!

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/10/2014 1:04:00 PM Looks and reads beautifully. Great Greg. 7's your lucky number today because I also love what you did here. Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 8:04:00 AM thank-you again for your email and feedback . . . much appreciated . . . all the very best my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/10/2014 12:43:00 PM Very unique and creative haiku in shape and topic, David! A 7 from me my dear friend :) love and light! xxxx D. Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 7:59:00 AM Thank-you Ms. Potter -- since the English language is not as descriptive and symbolic as the Japanese Language, I tried to use the placement of the sentences and letters to help create a deeper meaning. Thank-you for referencing the shape -- your faithful reading of the haiku is much appreciated. . . light and love.

Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 12:16:00 PM WOW you launched yourself to a 7 from me with this stunning haiku! Hugs jan x Login to Reply David Meade Date: 11/11/2014 8:02:00 AM The launching of flares and love-kisses are powerful events . . . as you well know . . . may your afternoon be filled with much love and tenderness, my sweet friend.