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Haiku 24

driftwood beached in helpless tumbling water... skeletons legacy 4/17/13

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2013 12:43:00 PM

Whoa!!What kind of skeletons??..Very descritpive work..Enjoyed reading..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..We are doing well even though we have some medical problems..We brought Cody home today from college for the summer...Sara

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/26/2013 8:52:00 PM

Phyllis, this is a very well-crafted haiku. I am impressed

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:43:00 PM

skeletons legacy, beautiful. Many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2013 4:55:00 PM

Hey, big congrats to you, Lady!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:07:00 PM

Phyllis, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2013 6:31:00 PM

Congrats on your wonderful win with a haiku l read over and over!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 12:48:00 PM

I love this Phyllis...congratulations

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:28:00 PM

thank you Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 10:10:00 AM

A mystery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:29:00 PM

thank you my haiku mentor

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/20/2013 11:44:00 PM

:) Oooh~ like this cool haiku;-) may check more of my poems later. Have a great week!!!!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:29:00 PM

thank you David

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/20/2013 3:26:00 PM

a few sylables off. 575 but this is very close. move up the in to the first line. but the last needs work. but the concept is perfect.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:30:00 PM

thanks John but this is the English form not the traditional Japanese form

J.W. Earnings
Date: 4/20/2013 11:44:00 PM

Yeah, I was about to say that. A few syllables off, but wonderful job indeed

Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2013 2:52:00 PM

love this haiku, Phyl - you've said so much in three lines. Awesome. Good on you for posting the blog about IS. Hope you're all doing good and are set for a relaxing weekend, my friend x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2013 12:39:00 AM

very nice one, Phyllis. thanks for visiting my poems today!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:30:00 PM

thanks my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2013 10:29:00 PM

Hello Phyllis, a very xool haiku. the imagery is deep.... Linda

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM

thanks my friend

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/17/2013 4:15:00 PM

love the haiku ;} and I thank you for reading Fairy Tales, I wrote it because I was tired of waiting for her to get home ;} you have an awesome day phyllis ;}

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM

thanks Debbie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2013 10:35:00 AM

Well written Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise