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Haiku 24

driftwood beached
in helpless tumbling water...
skeletons legacy

4/17/13

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Sara Kendrick

May 2, 2013 at 12:43 PM

Whoa!!What kind of skeletons??..Very descritpive work..Enjoyed reading..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..We are doing well even though we have some medical problems..We brought Cody home today from college for the summer...Sara

Jeremy Martin

April 26, 2013 at 8:52 PM

Phyllis, this is a very well-crafted haiku. I am impressed

Tahera Mannan

April 25, 2013 at 10:43 PM

skeletons legacy, beautiful. Many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

April 25, 2013 at 4:55 PM

Hey, big congrats to you, Lady!

Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2013 at 8:07 PM

Phyllis, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Connie Marcum Wong

April 23, 2013 at 6:31 PM

Congrats on your wonderful win with a haiku l read over and over!

Donna Jones

April 23, 2013 at 12:48 PM

I love this Phyllis...congratulations

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:28 PM

thank you Donna

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2013 at 10:10 AM

A mystery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:29 PM

thank you my haiku mentor

David William Breidenthal

April 20, 2013 at 11:44 PM

:) Oooh~ like this cool haiku;-) may check more of my poems later. Have a great week!!!!!

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:29 PM

thank you David

Jack Horne

April 19, 2013 at 2:52 PM

love this haiku, Phyl - you've said so much in three lines. Awesome. Good on you for posting the blog about IS. Hope you're all doing good and are set for a relaxing weekend, my friend x

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2013 at 12:39 AM

very nice one, Phyllis. thanks for visiting my poems today!

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:30 PM

thanks my friend

Poet Destroyer A

April 17, 2013 at 10:29 PM

Hello Phyllis, a very xool haiku. the imagery is deep.... Linda

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:31 PM

thanks my friend

Debbie Duncan

April 17, 2013 at 4:15 PM

love the haiku ;} and I thank you for reading Fairy Tales, I wrote it because I was tired of waiting for her to get home ;} you have an awesome day phyllis ;}

Phyllis Babcock

April 23, 2013 at 4:31 PM

thanks Debbie