Haiku 24 25 26 About a Shooting Star

PERFECT HAIKU... SKAT

Finally getting to your new haiku. Good as always! Have you tried switching out the middle lines of 1 and 2? #2 grabs me that way. Just a thought.

shooting star---/once again I forget/my wish-----kash poet :))

Your haikus are so brilliant and vivid. Excellent poetry. Write on! Always, Laura

I had to drop by and say hi dear Charma-- it's been a while since I last saw a shooting star but your haiku, made me think of them-- loved the 3rd one especially... I liked the melancholy here but yes so beautiful...hug and kiss adorable Christina for me please. Thank you

How awesome it is to read your stuff again, let alone seeing your awesome name leaving comments on my work. Fantastic! :) I'm always open for a good piece about the constellations. Great set of Haikus!

charma, I think I got your email? did it say Happy Easter?

Charma, a great set of haiku's...David

Three very good in a lovely bouquet!! <3 - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dang, your haikus make me jealous!...haha...kidding. They're just soooo good.

Charmaine, I do like shooting stars myself. Isn't it funny how they can symbolize so many different things? I love this work. May your wishes come true! Perhaps the unheard wish of the second of these three is because the wish was not yet heard so well inside yourself. That is why the second one is special in its own right! Sometimes I want something and don't really know it or the wish inhabits only part of my being. Anyway--just a thought provoking poem. Thanks

I love the idea of these. My favorites are one and three. Can't really decide between them. But I just don't like the second as well as those two. Maybe the first is the best. How are you, Charma? Happy Easter to you!