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Haiku 23: Prayer Life

kneeling I pour out
              father  –   your love I need  . . . 
                   hold me, I shudder 










David Meade
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

November 19, 2014 at 9:32 AM

love the humbleness i read inbetween the lines .

Liam Mcdaid

November 11, 2014 at 9:08 AM

very beautifully painted picture david

David Meade

November 14, 2014 at 8:57 PM

Thank-you my friend . . . all the best.

Mama Bear

November 11, 2014 at 8:38 AM

embracing God's love, how wonderful Well done. Blessings Edith

David Meade

November 14, 2014 at 8:58 PM

thank-you and may His love embrace you!

Charmaine Chircop

November 11, 2014 at 1:17 AM

Its when we pour out every thought and emotion..In that deep voidness of our soul is. when He comes.Beautiful!Charma

David Meade

November 11, 2014 at 7:48 AM

Yes, the emptying of oneself allows the Spirit to fill us with light, love and forgiveness. Thank-you for your words . . . may He always go forward to lead your way.

M. L. Kiser

November 10, 2014 at 2:20 PM

Moving and well written.

David Meade

November 11, 2014 at 7:49 AM

Thank-you for stopping by . . . may you always find love to fill you.

Andrea Dietrich

November 9, 2014 at 11:41 PM

a heartfelt sincere prayer !

David Meade

November 11, 2014 at 7:51 AM

Thank-you Andrea . . . from one who knows the solitude of the heart, my appreciated.

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 9, 2014 at 6:53 PM

I hear the heartfelt longings in your words David. Very precious Haiku.

David Meade

November 9, 2014 at 9:36 PM

Thank-you my dear friend . . love of a father is special.

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2014 at 3:02 PM

Very spiritually orientated..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

David Meade

November 9, 2014 at 9:37 PM

Thank-you Ms. Sara -- loved your poems today -- well, everyday!

Gary Bateman

November 9, 2014 at 1:58 PM

David, This one says so much!! The Lord God is there for all of us in our hour of need. We must ask for his help. Enjoyed this one immensely. Best Always, Gary (Amen!!)

David Meade

November 9, 2014 at 9:38 PM

Thank-you my spiritual friend -- may we always seek his help.