Haiku 23

beneath
hunter's boot
a pine cone cracks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 7:43 PM
It was so nice to hear from you GREAT work and with less than 17 too!Light & Love
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Thanks Debbie! I am so happy you like it :D... It's rare when I can write one below 10.... 'tis a challenge!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:44 PM
This makes me think of danger!!
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:53 PM
I'm glad you got the feeling. After hours of silence I don't think a pine cone cracking bodes well with the hunter... lol.
Hunter Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Right up my alley, Timothy...You know I love this one!..gotta step over those pine cones, though...haha.
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:53 PM
I just KNEW you would comment on this one Caleb. Not based on real experience, however...
Sibanda Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 4:04 AM
A pine cone cracks under the weight of a hunter`s boot. Vivid description. Beautiful Haiku 23.
Hicks Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:11 AM
I try to make haiku as short and concise as I can. Thanks for reading and connecting with the image.
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