Haiku 23

cut the white iris 
	tie flowers to last night’s rain 
	a jasmine music
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Very evocative, lovely haiku, I like the switch in touch and smell tied elsewhere.
Jordan Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Thanks for your kind comment. Jack
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