Haiku 23

new fallen snow
heavy laden with moisture...
avalanche rumbles

3/9/13
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Duncan Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Love the haiku Phyllis, have a blessed Easter Sunday ;}
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 2:22 PM
oh oh. I know what is going to happen!!! KA BAM. Awesome one, Phyllis.
Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Lovely imagery.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 12:02 PM
(I do not want more snow now, Phyllis.) - Well done! - Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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