Haiku # 23

The  morning  chill  bites

Deciduous  turns  to  brown

It's  the  rise  of  Fall  .

naturei do not know?

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Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2010 at 9:50 PM

cool last line, the rise of fall!

Helen J Radford

November 1, 2008 at 1:25 AM

cleverly crafted Sean

Raul Moreno

October 31, 2008 at 12:53 AM

Nice Haiku, clever insight...keep it up.

Farah Chamma

October 25, 2008 at 4:43 AM

Wonderful...Last line is great....Thank you for sharing... TYONe, farah

Michael Jordan

October 4, 2008 at 5:10 AM

Excellent Haiku - In fact I believe outstanding would be a much better word to use - I liked it a lot bro - God Bless

Farah Chamma

October 2, 2008 at 6:31 AM

Beautiful Haiku..beautiful! Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah

Carrie Richards

September 8, 2008 at 6:17 PM

I'm fairly new to the soup...but I'm learning that you are king of the haiku!! Lovely poem!...Carrie

Deneen White

August 27, 2008 at 6:35 PM

hi Sean, I like this write, sometimes the less said the better, and thanks for the comment on rain dance, take care D-nyce

August 16, 2008 at 11:45 AM

YOUR TALKING ABOUT THE FALL WEATHER BUT COME REAL WITH IT DEEP IN YOU SOUL RATE YOU 2% NOW GO CHECK OUT MY WORK

Vince Suzadail Jr.

August 13, 2008 at 7:00 AM

Now come on Sean, they tell me it's green all year over there. When I close my eyes and dream of going back, it's green even in the fall. God Bless. Vince