Haiku 22

The peace of this place, 
	the voice of sun on your lips.
	I now know beauty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:37 PM
You seem to know romance quite well, Jack, very lovely haiku
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:54 PM
I'm not so sure that I do, but I enjoy writing about it. I enjoy the emotional potential. Jack
A A Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 8:20 PM
"The voice of sun on your lips" excellent sentence. The thing is I can actually picture it. Thank you Mr Jordan for these beautiful words.
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 9:10 PM
You're welcome, and thank you for reading it. Jack
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Beautiful Jack
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Thanks, Donna. Have a good weekend. Jack
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March 9, 2013 at 11:58 AM
GORGEOUS! - Thank you Jack! . Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope you enjoyed Turkey, and that you too have a great weekend. Jack
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 11:05 AM
I LOVE this.
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Well, thanks! And happy Saturday to you. Jack
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