Haiku 21

The hot breath of life
just this side of intimate.  
A dance of the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Nicely done...
Jordan Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Thanks, Donna... Jack
Sanders Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 4:38 PM
nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo
Jordan Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Thanks for the comment. I'll check out her poems. Thanks for the suggestion. Jack
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 2:59 PM
this sizzles!!!
Jordan Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Siiiiiizzzzzzz. Jack
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