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Haiku 21

The hot breath of life just this side of intimate. A dance of the soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/7/2013 6:12:00 PM
Nicely done...
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/7/2013 9:49:00 PM
Thanks, Donna... Jack
Date: 3/7/2013 4:38:00 PM
nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo
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Date: 3/7/2013 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. I'll check out her poems. Thanks for the suggestion. Jack
Date: 3/7/2013 2:59:00 PM
this sizzles!!!
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:21:00 PM
Siiiiiizzzzzzz. Jack

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