Haiku 21

smudged charcoal on a full page--the kettle whistles

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2013 1:11:00 AM

This confuses me, is this a haiku?

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/20/2012 12:35:00 PM

I only get an hour a day on the library computor, sooo, that's why I'm reading this one vs your master's houses. :) One line, now that I have time for. :) A thought in a day, just what does it say. An artist, a writer, a page of dismay. The kettle is calling to give you a break. A hot cup of tea, ah yes, for heavens sake. :)

David Williams

Date: 11/20/2012 12:30:00 PM

Debbie this is cool, but have I been missing out on some new form of writing haiku? if so please tell..David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2012 10:41:00 AM

Like the imagery Debbie. - well done- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/20/2012 8:25:00 AM

sUCH FEW WORDS CAN SURE HOLD A LOT OF MEANING. tHANKS FOR SHARING. LUCILLA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2012 7:39:00 AM

This one brings all kinds of thoughts to my mind..Enjoyed reading this morn.."Ginko" is a tree..Its leaves turn a beautiful yellow or golden in the fall ..There it is a very ancient Chinese tree in a Japanese poem..Its leaves are used for medicine in China and in the US..It seems to help with circulation..It opens up the vessels so that the circulation is better..I do enjoy mine in the front yard..It has been beautiful this year..Soon the yard will be covered with it yellow though..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2012 7:40:00 AM

Oh!, Forgot thanks for stopping by..Sara