Haiku 21

smudged charcoal on a full page--the kettle whistles
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Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 1:11 AM
This confuses me, is this a haiku?
Johnson Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 12:35 PM
I only get an hour a day on the library computor, sooo, that's why I'm reading this one vs your master's houses. :) One line, now that I have time for. :) A thought in a day, just what does it say. An artist, a writer, a page of dismay. The kettle is calling to give you a break. A hot cup of tea, ah yes, for heavens sake. :)
Williams Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Debbie this is cool, but have I been missing out on some new form of writing haiku? if so please tell..David
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Like the imagery Debbie. - well done- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 8:25 AM
sUCH FEW WORDS CAN SURE HOLD A LOT OF MEANING. tHANKS FOR SHARING. LUCILLA
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 7:39 AM
This one brings all kinds of thoughts to my mind..Enjoyed reading this morn.."Ginko" is a tree..Its leaves turn a beautiful yellow or golden in the fall ..There it is a very ancient Chinese tree in a Japanese poem..Its leaves are used for medicine in China and in the US..It seems to help with circulation..It opens up the vessels so that the circulation is better..I do enjoy mine in the front yard..It has been beautiful this year..Soon the yard will be covered with it yellow though..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Oh!, Forgot thanks for stopping by..Sara
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