Haiku # 21 .

Coloured  rays  from  clouds  .

Spotlights  on  the  horizon    .

Featuring  blue  seas  .
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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:11 PM
Here I am for another round, Sean. I am trying to figure out where I left off. Too bad everyone doesn't do limericks and haiku . I could catch up on all my fav poets' works! OH, and this was neat how you compared it to a scene being spotlighted!
Stella Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:52 AM
this would look neat on a plaque with seas as background thanks dear friend for sharing you kick these out pertty fast and you paint a nice picture too keep on sharing enjoying the reads
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:08 AM
Mk kind of Haiku, featuring blue seas. I'm waiting for ballads and all I'm getting are haikus, even though they are written well. Have a great one Sean. Vince
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2008 at 8:21 AM
Great imagery in this Haiku. Thanks for your remarks. ~Peace~Gar
Dawood Avatar
June 11, 2008 at 2:20 AM
Is it Summer where you are? Lovely Haiku Sean!!! Peace Fathima
Strand Avatar
June 11, 2008 at 12:35 AM
Full of colour Sean..likeb these haiku Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Beer Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 7:33 PM
Sean, I do have to admit I am not very knowledgable about the various kinds of poetry. This poem paints a beautiful picture. Good one, God Bless, Cile
Tye Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 6:38 AM
I personally, find the forms of few lines are the hardest. You make it look so easy! Great job! :) Cheers, Alana
Reynolds Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 5:45 AM
Haiku number 21, certainly is most well done! What a beautiful image...I was just poem writing in my mind yesterday about the suns rays shining through the trees...nothing is more breathtaking. Awesome! Kristin XO
Winter Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 5:21 AM
Wow. This one makes me wish I was there. Absolutely breathtaking. Nice going Sean. Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 4:49 AM
SEan, you are so masterring this form. The visual clarity within this is great and the form itself is perfect. Michael
Strand Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 2:33 AM
Great series Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments
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