Haiku

smoky clouds
descend through twilight
home to roost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 1:44 PM
enjoyed reading today!! thanks for sharing with us!!
Arteaga Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:56 AM
smoky clouds so thick but not deathly, very nice haiku
Murphy Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:54 AM
very nice faleshia
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Very intriguing imagery in your great haiku, Jem! Love it! Best wishes, Carolyn
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