Haiku # 20

Darkest  hour  now  fades

Illuminating   light  shines

Just  then..... The  East  wins  .

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Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2010 at 10:12 PM

At a moment's notice! Nature is splendid!

Arany P.

February 22, 2009 at 1:18 AM

this is an excellent haiku!! loved the way you just darkened me... Sean, where are you.. missing your writes and your wittiness!! don't let that brain of yours RUST!... ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

August 28, 2008 at 10:05 AM

Love this! Anything to do with a sunrise always is good reading, but the way you put it to form ishere is amazing. Michael

August 11, 2008 at 12:09 PM

Interesting reflection in this short form. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Gary Jones

June 12, 2008 at 8:23 AM

Several senses used in ths one. I always like to squeeze as many of the senses as possible into poetry. It seems to make it come alive. Another Good one. ~Peace~Gar