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cold feet long for spring. . .
ice cycles fall stabbing snow
where asters will bloom


For Carol Brown's haiku contest "Waiting for Spring"

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Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 1:53 PM

Already you are longing for spring, Connie. Those asters will not be put off, and right on time they will sprout, a show of resilience. ~ Warm regards // paul

Audrey Haick

February 3, 2010 at 7:25 PM

Beautiful painting in my mind, Connie! Especially today when we have a few inches! Peace and love, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 2, 2010 at 12:03 AM

I really liked the images that your 2nd line evokes--much like tilling the soil for the flowers to emerge--beautiful take on waiting for spring :) Wish you the best in the contest :)