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cold feet long for spring. . . ice cycles fall stabbing snow where asters will bloom For Carol Brown's haiku contest "Waiting for Spring"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2021 1:53:00 PM
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Already you are longing for spring, Connie. Those asters will not be put off, and right on time they will sprout, a show of resilience. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Audrey Haick
Date: 2/3/2010 7:25:00 PM
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Beautiful painting in my mind, Connie! Especially today when we have a few inches! Peace and love, Audrey
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/2/2010 12:03:00 AM
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I really liked the images that your 2nd line evokes--much like tilling the soil for the flowers to emerge--beautiful take on waiting for spring :) Wish you the best in the contest :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/30/2010 8:29:00 PM
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Great image of the "ice cycles" stabbing the snow where spring blooms will soon appear. Awesome haiku, Connie! Love, Carolyn
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Kim Hilliker
Date: 1/30/2010 12:03:00 PM
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I long for Spring, too. Nicely written Haiku.
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Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 1/29/2010 8:34:00 PM
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very enjoyable realistic Haiku, Connie! I like it much. -Robert
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/29/2010 7:24:00 PM
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Connie. wow is this new? I think it is meeting the real requiements of a haiku and i LOVE it. Andrea ps. you gotta place in the contest with this!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2010 4:33:00 PM
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Beautiful Haiku that should do well in the contest. Good luck. I especially like the second line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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