Haiku 1 - Up Comes Dinner

Desperate to be thinner
Down goes two fingers
And up comes my dinner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Having worked with kids with eating disorders it made me feel sad reading this Julia:-( hugs Jan xx
Romano Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:08 PM
<3
White Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Heh! It's ironic, smart, painful. Not quite a haiku or senryu, but close. And very witty and cleverly written. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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