Haiku 1

I bled myself dry because of you slaughtered, drained exsanguinated

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/21/2014 11:29:00 AM

A new word. Fun. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2014 10:07:00 AM

L. M. K.,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 2:49:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2014 5:27:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, L.M.K. :) - I choose your first great written haiku poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)