Haiku 1

feathers uncurl first leap invisible trust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 5:22 PM
hey, this is pretty cool. I am imagining a baby bird jumping from his nest! (glad you liked that falling star line of mine)
Mehta Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Nice imagery
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