Haiku 1

bent Picasso face reflects fragments of light-- defective mirror?

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Painted Hunter

Date: 4/15/2013 2:26:00 PM

Thanks! Its comments like yours that will inspire me to finish the book. Makes me feel good that you enjoy the writing. Honestly, sometimes I hate the book...it seems to have a mind of its own, and I'm unsure of my ability to make anything worth reading. But, more than anything, I just want to know I did it. Thanks again, Heather. If and when, I finish, I'll send you a copy.

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/5/2013 1:28:00 PM

Ha...maybe so. Seriously cool, Heather. Its haikuku-krazy!Well, I'll be gone til' monday. I'm off to the Ozark Mountains to hunt turkey all weekend...Gobble! Gobble!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2013 6:47:00 PM

Heather, I was just noticing, all the top wins were "dark" poems. I am glad I went with a dark theme . I had no idea what she would like best!!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 3/18/2013 10:29:00 AM

So jam-packed for such few words. It takes way longer to ponder and visualise these than it does to read them.

Jack Jordan

Date: 3/4/2013 9:09:00 PM

Or perhaps just a different eye? Your haiku are fun to read. You should write them more often. J

Frank Polgar

Date: 1/5/2013 9:08:00 PM

Really like this poem and the comparison between Picasso and the defective mirror.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2012 5:01:00 PM

heather, I am going offline now and couldn't find a new poem of yours to see. I do believe I have seen nearly all your poems now! But maybe a few to go. there is a contest on questionku right now. This is kind of in that category but he wants them: 4/5/6.YOu should try one. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 9:15:00 PM

I like this one!

Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:25:00 AM