Haiku 1

bent Picasso face
reflects fragments of light--
defective mirror?

introspectionhaiku

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Painted Hunter

April 15, 2013 at 2:26 PM

Thanks! Its comments like yours that will inspire me to finish the book. Makes me feel good that you enjoy the writing. Honestly, sometimes I hate the book...it seems to have a mind of its own, and I'm unsure of my ability to make anything worth reading. But, more than anything, I just want to know I did it. Thanks again, Heather. If and when, I finish, I'll send you a copy.

Painted Hunter

April 5, 2013 at 1:28 PM

Ha...maybe so. Seriously cool, Heather. Its haikuku-krazy!Well, I'll be gone til' monday. I'm off to the Ozark Mountains to hunt turkey all weekend...Gobble! Gobble!

Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2013 at 6:47 PM

Heather, I was just noticing, all the top wins were "dark" poems. I am glad I went with a dark theme . I had no idea what she would like best!!

Isaiah Zerbst

March 18, 2013 at 10:29 AM

So jam-packed for such few words. It takes way longer to ponder and visualise these than it does to read them.

Jack Jordan

March 4, 2013 at 9:09 PM

Or perhaps just a different eye? Your haiku are fun to read. You should write them more often. J

Frank Polgar

January 5, 2013 at 9:08 PM

Really like this poem and the comparison between Picasso and the defective mirror.

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2012 at 5:01 PM

heather, I am going offline now and couldn't find a new poem of yours to see. I do believe I have seen nearly all your poems now! But maybe a few to go. there is a contest on questionku right now. This is kind of in that category but he wants them: 4/5/6.YOu should try one. Luv, Andrea