Haiku #1

Red heart reflected
On water stilled and cold
Warmed by breath gentle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 26, 2016 at 11:08 AM
MALCOM, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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February 16, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Wecome back to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy the time you spent here. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 16, 2010 at 3:57 AM
very nice
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February 16, 2010 at 2:05 AM
Malcolm, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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