Haiku 19

Twigs scratch your window
Pull your covers close and tight
No breeze blows tonight



Gene Bourne.
03-16-14



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Charmaine Chircop

August 2, 2014 at 5:10 PM

You are great at haiku-Exceptional!!Tnks for the beautiful comment on my Magnolia poem.

Gene Bourne

August 2, 2014 at 8:39 PM

Hi, Charmaine....'There's a big Magnolia in our back yard. We've never trimmed it, so you can walk under it. The traditional way is to leave the limbs untrimmed and let them skirt the ground. Thanks for your comment on my Haiku. Your PS friend, Gene.

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2014 at 5:50 PM

oooh, kinda scary!!! Let me see one more haiku of yours. I just love finding poets with haiku.

Gene Bourne

June 28, 2014 at 12:03 PM

NOTE...I hurriedly revised line one and failed to alter a word. My apologies to the first 12 readers who found 6, rather than the corrected 5 syllables in line one. Everything's OK now....:>) Your PS friend..... Gene