Haiku 19

Twigs scratch your window
Pull your covers close and tight
No breeze blows tonight



Gene Bourne.
03-16-14



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/2/2014 5:10:00 PM
You are great at haiku-Exceptional!!Tnks for the beautiful comment on my Magnolia poem.
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:39:00 PM
Hi, Charmaine....'There's a big Magnolia in our back yard. We've never trimmed it, so you can walk under it. The traditional way is to leave the limbs untrimmed and let them skirt the ground. Thanks for your comment on my Haiku. Your PS friend, Gene.
Date: 7/18/2014 5:50:00 PM
oooh, kinda scary!!! Let me see one more haiku of yours. I just love finding poets with haiku.
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Date: 6/28/2014 12:03:00 PM
NOTE...I hurriedly revised line one and failed to alter a word. My apologies to the first 12 readers who found 6, rather than the corrected 5 syllables in line one. Everything's OK now....:>) Your PS friend..... Gene
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:54:00 AM
Dear Gene: Very nice fragment moment. Leon
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Gene Bourne
Date: 6/28/2014 11:51:00 AM
Dear Leon...Thanks so much for your comment on this "creepy" Haiku. Have a great weekend.....Your PS friend....Gene.
Date: 6/28/2014 7:54:00 AM
- A skilled haiku - .... listen ..... it scratch on the window pane ... no wind - Have a great weekend, Gene. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 8:41:00 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise, for your comments....kinda creepy, this Haiku. You have a super weekend, as well. YF.....Gene.
Date: 6/28/2014 12:25:00 AM
Apt images well crafted haiku, Gene
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Gene Bourne
Date: 6/28/2014 7:49:00 AM
Dr.Mehta...Thanks for your comments. They are most They are most appreciated. I look forward to reading your posts..... Your PS friend, Gene.
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