Haiku 19

Intense sensation,
the essence of an instant.
Into liquid bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Loved the last line, nice work.
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:23 PM
Thanks for reading it, Raul. Jack
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Jack. super...David
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Thanks! I appreciate the comment. J
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 11:54 PM
wow, what a great way to describe bliss.
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Good stuff, that bliss... J
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Lovely haiku, Jack. - Sending you some sunshine! Right now I am enjoying a warm and lovely spring sunshine in Turkey ..... GORGEOUS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Enjoy your sunny trip! J
A   Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Good morning Jack, great intense imagery... love the way it all dissolves... always~ LINDA
Jordan Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Good Saturday to you as well. Thanks for the comment and the visit. j
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work this morn..Your comment was uplifting..Sara
Jordan Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 10:46 AM
You're welcome. I enjoyed reading your work. K
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