Haiku 19

car covered in ice
in cold damp morn...
birds sing merrily

12/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 12:31 AM
yes, lol, the birds are always cheerful, aren't they? enjoyed picturing this, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Do you enjoy the snow and ice?..Your work reads like it doesn't slow the birds down..It still looks like rain here..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 9:55 AM
hey,wish you had some new poems for us here to read today. I will look a while in your oldies but doubt I can find one I have not read already. Yep, sure is nice when snow GOES AWAY
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Good haiku, Phyllis!!! A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 6:13 PM
I still love this one and hoping to see another by Xmas time!! Luv ya, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 8:19 AM
can relate to this Phyllis, yes and the birds also,, happened to me just this morning... your poem speaks volumes.. just love this.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 9:25 AM
Hope they have their little booties on Lol xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:50 PM
I love the contrast in this haiku. Just wonderful, phyllis!!! and thanks for reading several of my poems today. I'm waiting for you to post a BUNCH. Luv ya, Andrea
West Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Great Haiku Phyllis, great omagery. Rollo
Cayton Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 4:33 PM
nice poem, makes me a bit chilled.... been fortunate with the weather.
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