Sean Kelly Poet Haiku

Haiku # 19

Crow  magpie  and  dove

Blackbird  thrush  robin  and  wren

The pecking order  .....


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Lunch ~time at  our bird~table ; NOT as we wish , but the reality of how it IS !!..

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Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2010 at 10:13 PM wow, this is not only a fun read, but informative as well!! And the peaceful dove came before blackbird!!!

Michael Degenhardt August 28, 2008 at 10:04 AM Again, the form is dead on and the imagery comes through clearly. Love the last line to this and the creativity of it. Michael