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Haiku 197 abandoned

graying clouds advance
poles arms outstretch soundness perch~
pups on riverbank

12/4/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Greenhough Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Poem seems sad. I hope the pups will be OK. A very nice haiku.
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December 4, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Poor puppies...hope they are ok
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:59 AM
- Hope they get a loving home, Eve ... so cute puppies - hugs
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