Haiku 18: Life Question

what do you see

                      beautifully created   --   fatally flawed

                                       
                                       will you love me









David Meade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:48 PM
There was only one perfect person in this world David - we all have flaws just with some they are more visible than with others:-) Great haiku:-)Hugs Jan xxx
Meade Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:41 PM
It's incredible, he loves us with all of our flaws!
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Good question..We all have our flaws..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Meade Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:42 PM
some of us even have claws! you are always so kind. Go Bulldogs.
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:22 PM
a great life question for one's romantic interest!!
Meade Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:38 PM
It's always good to know what you are getting into!!! Hope you will see this note -- tomorrow's poem I used your suggestion!
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