Haiku 18 .

Spider  weaving  web  .

His  crochet  entrapment  plan  .

Yes !   sew  far  , so good  .
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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Ah, a great word play!!
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December 1, 2008 at 2:16 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. You have a gift for humor and brightening up the day. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
Thomas Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 5:30 AM
Love the last line of this haiku! Thank you for the morning chuckle and for your comment on my haiku "Winter Creek". I appreciate it so much!
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2008 at 6:20 PM
Loved this....very clever writing, and keen sense of humor!! ~Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 10:00 AM
I like the double entendre with regard to the word "sew". Excellent form and perfect imagery made for a great write. Michael
Chamma Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 11:22 PM
That's a smart piece! Very creative Sean..Impressive^^ TYONe, Farah
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