Haiku 18512

Squinty morning rays
Sparkle on the dewy grass
Dog's muddy paw prints
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Very nice!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Very clever haiku with awesome imagery! Surprise ending made me giggle - well done, Tim! Best regards. Pandita
Peterson Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Thank you :)
Sands Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:38 AM
I can see it clearly. Well done :)
Peterson Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thank you.
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