Haiku 18512

Squinty morning rays
Sparkle on the dewy grass
Dog's muddy paw prints

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/12/2018 9:09:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Very clever haiku with awesome imagery! Surprise ending made me giggle - well done, Tim! Best regards. Pandita
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Tim Peterson
Date: 5/12/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/12/2018 9:38:00 AM
I can see it clearly. Well done :)
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Tim Peterson
Date: 5/12/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thank you.
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