Haiku 17 In Solemn Adoration

incense' scent wafts amongst the silent crowd i sneeze out loud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Zerbst Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Ha! one of those embarrasing yet humourous moments. Sounds familiar.
Grisetti Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:33 PM
beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.
Grisetti Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:32 PM
beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.
K. Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 9:28 AM
I could imagine this happening!! :D I love the twist at the end, sweet lucky Charma :D! Send you quick soupmail! :D hugs to you sweetie! and thank you for dropping by my poems :D
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:51 PM
I love this one too. you got the juxtaposition down GOOD with this, Charma
Dey Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Well express.
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM
:)+:) - like it - well written. - Anne-Lise
Burch Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:23 PM
:)Well Done Charma! lol big hugs, love ya deb
Poet Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Another good haiku from you Charma.Enjoyed the read.
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