haiku



In the dark of night
fireflies luminous light dots
Bat buffet delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Doll Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Mike, thanks for the visit and comment.
Gentile Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 4:25 AM
OMG, I love that last line Warren! Such imagery, a perfect haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Oh, so sad to think they are a midnight snack. Love the ku!
Doll Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 3:19 PM
Hi Kim, thanks for your comment and visit~ Warren
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 7:11 AM
I love that final line especially - would love to see fire flies for real - we do have bats on our island though:-) hugs Jan xx
Doll Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Hi Jan, it's great to hear from you. I'm glad that you enjoyed this haiku. Hugs~ Warren
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