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In the dark of night fireflies luminous light dots Bat buffet delight

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Date: 6/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
I love that final line especially - would love to see fire flies for real - we do have bats on our island though:-) hugs Jan xx
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Warren Doll
Date: 6/30/2025 8:15:00 AM
Hi Jan, it's great to hear from you. I'm glad that you enjoyed this haiku. Hugs~ Warren

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