Haiku

sparrow feathers
flutter on domestic fields -
tabby cat leaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 25, 2009 at 5:23 PM
Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspective. You have me smiling. Keep on writing. Karen
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August 25, 2009 at 11:31 AM
Awwwwwwww Jem. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. Love, Carol
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August 25, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Truth that kinda crushes. Sara
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August 25, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Poor sparrow ! Great write my friend ! james
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