Haiku

Creeping frost crystals inch their way along the edge of red Maple veins

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2015 4:35:00 PM

I love this and the other two poems of yours that came to my hotmail today from Soup.Congratulations on the publicity from Soup. It's nice when they honor poets from time to time!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2014 10:07:00 AM

Fascinating imagery! // paul

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 3/15/2014 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am an artist by trade, and when I couldn't paint this picture, I went back to my Haiku. ~J~

Daver Austin

Date: 6/20/2010 5:27:00 AM

I love trees too. This implies, to me, that the maple will survive the winter. Love. daver

Date: 3/25/2010 1:46:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 3/25/2010 2:08:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Judith.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/21/2009 12:38:00 PM

OH BURR!! Great image! Good luck in the contest!! ~TRU~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2009 6:26:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Judith. Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/18/2009 2:09:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Judith.Rgds Brian