Haiku

Creeping frost crystals
inch their way along the edge
of red Maple veins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:35 PM
I love this and the other two poems of yours that came to my hotmail today from Soup.Congratulations on the publicity from Soup. It's nice when they honor poets from time to time!
Callus Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Fascinating imagery! // paul
Meyer Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Thank you Paul. I am an artist by trade, and when I couldn't paint this picture, I went back to my Haiku. ~J~
Austin Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:27 AM
I love trees too. This implies, to me, that the maple will survive the winter. Love. daver
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March 25, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:08 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Judith.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
Rider Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 12:38 PM
OH BURR!! Great image! Good luck in the contest!! ~TRU~
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 6:26 AM
Beautiful Haiku Judith. Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 2:09 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Judith.Rgds Brian
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