Haiku 16

16

The air near the eyes,
the fragrance of eyelashes.
Red words of the heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:41 PM
'stunning imagery with the red words!!
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:19 PM
"Heart" came first, then a blood image. I'm a visual person in the main, so I see the words most of the time as I write them.
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Soooo sweet, Jack !!!! Well done. - Have a pleasant day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
Jordan Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Thanks1 Maybe it should have been for Valentine's day? J
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