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Haiku 16

16 The air near the eyes, the fragrance of eyelashes. Red words of the heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 4:41:00 PM
'stunning imagery with the red words!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:19:00 PM
"Heart" came first, then a blood image. I'm a visual person in the main, so I see the words most of the time as I write them.
Date: 2/21/2013 1:16:00 PM
Soooo sweet, Jack !!!! Well done. - Have a pleasant day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/21/2013 1:58:00 PM
Thanks1 Maybe it should have been for Valentine's day? J

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