Haiku 16

red raspberry bushes
wasps gather to eat...
her stained ruby lips

10/15/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Ahhhh!!I know those lips were flavorful..Enjoyed this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your Canadian air came down to us by way of the jet stream and the hurricane..It is warmer today though..Yesterday and last night it was bad with the wind factored in but it is not as windy today..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 11:20 PM
oh,I had seen this one. And I still find it wonderful. thanks for your several comments today, Phyllis. Sure wish I had time to seek out any oldies of yours I may never have read yet.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:08 PM
wow, you did REALLY well with this one. A gorgeous haiku, my friend.
Austin Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:01 PM
A very fine Haiku, Phyllis. I love the form because the reader can read so many things into the lines. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Well done....very tasteful. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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