Haiku 16

red raspberry bushes wasps gather to eat... her stained ruby lips 10/15/12

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2012 6:41:00 PM

Ahhhh!!I know those lips were flavorful..Enjoyed this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your Canadian air came down to us by way of the jet stream and the hurricane..It is warmer today though..Yesterday and last night it was bad with the wind factored in but it is not as windy today..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2012 11:20:00 PM

oh,I had seen this one. And I still find it wonderful. thanks for your several comments today, Phyllis. Sure wish I had time to seek out any oldies of yours I may never have read yet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2012 2:08:00 PM

wow, you did REALLY well with this one. A gorgeous haiku, my friend.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/18/2012 2:01:00 PM

A very fine Haiku, Phyllis. I love the form because the reader can read so many things into the lines. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2012 11:46:00 AM

Well done....very tasteful. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)