Haiku

subtropical night gently oscillating fan refreshing slumber
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Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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January 11, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Dear Margaret, Beautiful haiku, so well woven . I love “ oscillating fan” and the last line! So unique and profound! Picturesque too. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win in brians contest
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Sounds wonderful! I close my eyes and imagine I’m there needing the cool of the fan! :)
Foster Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Many thanks for your comments Kim. Both on this one and my garnet one they’re much appreciated. Cheers.
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 11:52 AM
- Great haiku, Margaret :) - hugs
Foster Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 4:16 PM
Thank you, Anne. Have a great year.
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