Haiku

subtropical night gently oscillating fan refreshing slumber

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2025 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2025 12:06:00 PM

Dear Margaret, Beautiful haiku, so well woven . I love “ oscillating fan” and the last line! So unique and profound! Picturesque too. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win in brians contest

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2025 12:19:00 PM

Sounds wonderful! I close my eyes and imagine I’m there needing the cool of the fan! :)

Margaret Foster
Date: 1/4/2025 4:15:00 PM

Many thanks for your comments Kim. Both on this one and my garnet one they’re much appreciated. Cheers.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2025 11:52:00 AM

- Great haiku, Margaret :) - hugs

Margaret Foster
Date: 1/4/2025 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, Anne. Have a great year.