haiku

mid january spring crocus carpet blooming unseen under snow

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Christina Bowring

Date: 4/25/2024 2:47:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku dear Warren. I love the imagery of ‘ spring crocus carpet blooming’. A delightful read. Thank you for sharing. Hope you’re having a lovely spring. :):)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/15/2024 6:48:00 AM

I like your haiku. There is beauty in nature, some of it unseen.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2024 6:51:00 AM

- Spring comes in March/April here, after a long and cold winter :) - Have a lovely Easter, Warren :) - hugs

Warren Doll
Date: 3/31/2024 6:52:00 AM

Anne- Lise, great to hear from you. Spring usually starts in March/April where I live too but, it came early this year in Jan. You have a wonderful Easter too. Big hugs~ Warren

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/3/2024 4:31:00 AM

Helll Warren, what a great Haiku and I always know when spring is coming because my Snow Bells are the first to bloom. This year they came out the beginning of February. I enjoyed reading this morning. - Blessings, Daniel

Warren Doll
Date: 3/4/2024 5:46:00 AM

Daniel. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your positive comments and visit ~ Warren